4/2/10

Melancholy- My Comrade



Deeper, deeper, deeper, down she goes,

Comes, nearer and nearer and consoles.

She is my friend, she is eternity,

I love her and call her Melancholy.



When sleepless at night in solitude,

When looking at the stars with no fortitude,

When haplessly, staring at the lonesome sidewalks,

And listening to the night’s silent talks.



She comes and silently stands by my side,

Takes me deep, down on her fantasy ride,

Silently wipes away the dew-drops,

Softly with her angelic hands, she mops,

The corners of the eye-lashes,

Where the pain reflects and flashes.


When shattered, ruptured and tormented heart,

Is further tortured, pained and broken apart,

Like a heavenly bird, she sings a threnody,

And her mellifluous voice glorifies the melody.

4 comments :

डाॅ रामजी गिरि said...

YOUR WORDS TOUCHED SOMETHING DEEP INSIDE ME...
Beautiful poetry....
But do strive for the brighter shades of life,too..

P said...

nice.. Liked it.. a little down tone.. can be a bit more lifting..

Arham said...

u reminded me of Alice in Wonderland...lol
nice one yaar...m falling short of wrds whn goin thru ur evry poem...
m fine...how bout u...Glad to knw tht I've got a neighbour Rajasthani!! :)
what's ur email id BTW...i don't like posting all these on one of ur posts!! :D :D

swati sachdeva said...

"beautiful words from a beautiful soul..."
loved every feel of it..
keep writing,u hav a long way to go princess..
love & luck